dreon

 i learned how to right a claim better.

 i learned how to fix and change language and style, grammar and spelling and to find consistent verbs tenses in my partner essays.

the class is still learning how to revise and and write a better paragraph.

 im still learning how to write better, i learned more about how technology is destroying the world but that’s nothing new.

 i learned about the writing process and how to write a perfect essay. i learned how to get a job basically and write a essay at the same time.

 i can’t deny that i’m tall. i wanna be the tallest person in the world if i could i would. every time somebody calls me short i get ready to say no i’m not i get happy to say it. i just love being tall so much i couldn’t deny it.

 2 years ago i got in trouble before the summer and couldn’t go nowhere. i was so bored i didn’t know what to do, i started reading a book. i had a scooter i would only in my neighborhood i didn’t know anybody in. i felt so worthless just sitting in the house all day everyday, thought i was in jail.

 i have way to much hair, every time i wanna eat i have to wrap my hair up so it wont get in the way of me eating.when i have to wash my hair it feel so heavy i can barely pick my head up. in the sun my head feels so HOT and itchy it starts to burn sometimes. when i'm sleep i have to wrap my hair up or i'm not going to be able to sleep.

 im thankful to be here on this earth. without my parents there wouldn’t be a dreon,that's why a cherish them. i can’t be more thankful for them.

 when my cousin was born it was like becoming an uncle, and i always wanted to.i like taking care of babies not the loud ones that cry all the time. i always took care of the baby when my aunt went out or went to work.

 every time i walk i into school i have no fun. i don’t smile, talk there’s nothing fun to do in school. when i get off the buss i already know its going to be a boring day of school. even the last day of school is no fun but i think its meant to be like that.

 i am certain that i am going to make it in life. there’s no question about it that i'm not going to have my own businesses.when i was a little kid i always thought about being successful but not knowing what to do, but i finally have chosen.

 i used to know how to play football in middle school. i played left tackle on offense and defense. i loved the sport, i just couldn’t win. that’s why i stopped playing.